Im super nervous about how my film is looking and if its good enough for the premiere but im gonna keep chipping away at it. I think I’ve finished editing film now. Ive got a lot of unused footage that im going back and forth about using and replacing other footage, but I think this is the final film. This is just a low quality render I did so i can ask some of the class what they thought and if there were any major changes needed

They gave me a couple of suggestions which I’m going to work on now, and hopefully by later tonight, otherwise tomorrow I’ll be done with this and be able to begin colour grading.

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UPDATE

So after listening to Chey, Nina and Susans comments I went back and added things to make some scenes weirder. I tried doing this glitchy thing with the toast and the banana but it didn’t work so I left it. I also added in a tree that is upside down in the bar, I flipped Ryans reflection in one of the mirrors in the bathroom and then lastly I added in a chair that was upside down. My only issue is with the chair though, I think the perspective is slightly off and the image is too clear compared to the rest of the scene. I dont think it’s too big of an issue though becasue both Nina and Liv didn’t even notice the chair. So i feel like it’ll be something only some people notice, and only for a couple of seconds.

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